高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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I used to live in a beautiful small town with green trees and followers．The river near the town，had clean water in which fish could be seen swimming in groups. There are no cars and no many persons.People here worked hard all year,their life is simple,busy and tired. Now great changes have taken place here. You can see tall buildings has appeared.Cars and buses are running in broad streets. But with the development of teconology ,pollution's question is becoming more and more serious. Many trees and fishs have disappeared because of the dirty water. Now,solving the situation's question have bacome the most important thing.