2、词数:120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
词汇表达不够丰富,要增加学术词汇的使用;文中句子错误偏多了;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;可以适当增加副词的使用;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Notice School begin to hire a bicycle club Basic training once a week for the club, a mentor, arrange extracurricular sports activities in time; once a month of outdoor activities, arrangements in the rest will compete with other groups; Join the club can strengthen body, can also make friends. Pay attention to equipment owned free activities Interested parties to the academic report hall set