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假如你是李明，你的班里来了一位英国交换生Paul。他在和你的交谈中表示在中国学习压力很大。请你给他写封信，给他提一些建议。
3．多做运动，运动可以帮助自己缓解压力，并且有助于睡眠。
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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Dear Paul, I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from a great deal of pressure. I am sorry to hear that. As far as I am concerned,you should tell your problem to your teachers or your classmates Who will provide for you with useful advice.You might turn to them for help. Then I suggest you not think much about your exam grades.Instead,you should always think much about your progress in some areas,which enable to bring you confidence. Above all,playing sports can be morn than helpful.The more exercise you do,the more healthy you will be.Sports should help you fell at ease as well as cutting down your pressure. What's more,sports can contribute to your sleep. Best wishes!
