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Hello ever body!Here are English Listen. As you know,spaceflight is extremely important to our country.In order to enrich our knowledge of spaceflight our school host a lecture about China Spaceflight at school Auditorium.The speech begin at Jan.5th,2:30 p.m. Professor Li BO will introduce the development,background,course of China Spaceflight and Shenzhou spacecrafts.