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At present, cars are becoming more and more popular. More and more people are buying cars for personal use because cars are becoming cheaper and cheaper. Owning a car, you can travel to anywhere you like.Having one’s own car can make people’s life easier and more convenient but at the same time, it brings problems. As the existing roads are not so wide for the increasing number of cars, so there may be more traffic jams and it will brings about more air pollution. Everything has it advantages and disadvantages.