Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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From the form we can easily draw a conclution that the high degree will get employment easily. On the other hand who have high degree will earn more money than low degree.But i think thay education's degree can't decide everything and there have a phrase:" nothing is imposiible ." just as the above form we can see the tiny different that high education doesn't earn more money entirely.So as for me ,i think that must have some details we depending on. Finally ,we can't deny the education's advantage for us ,and i think it is necessary for us , as long as we can combine the practices and konwledges,we will do better than before.