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Dear Mr. Lee, I was very glad to get your letter. Thank you for your invitation. I'd like to go to your schoolwhich is beautiful, but I just couldn't. I am going to a friend's birthday that will happen to be on December 8.At the end of next month, so I will fly back to New York. I really feel sorry to lose this good chance to enjoy myself with you. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, John