2013年2月2日雅思大作文真题:Watching TV

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Watching TV has always been an important part of after school life for children, and some of them even become TV addicts. Therefore some people advocate ‘no TV for children’. Of course this is understandable. Firstly, children sitting too mu ch time in front of a screen tend to hdoor eyesight and weak body due to lack o physical exercise. They can jding theiklr parenment. Anotheuyir concern is about their mental development which needs hj,rious typesactive activities, but obviouslyexcessive TV viewing cannot meet such requirement. The worst part can be some programs which are not proper for crgency and disasters on the screen are also a disadj,hvantageous point for immature people who are prone to be influenced negkatively. However watching TV in moderation with proper parental supervision can be good for children. There are pleeducational programs which can expand children’s knowledge and spark their interestin exploring the world where they may not have the opdfgunio visit in real life, such as the nature and wild life. TV is not only an educational source, hjbut is also a recreational activityhj,. It can help enrich their aftelass activities. For example, children are always excited to watch cartoons and they would experience the adventure tkogether with the characters in thshow. The positive effects would be enlarged if children are able to share their TV time wigfdeir parents or peers, because they would have topics in common and more communication can be followed. In general, I’d like to cnclude that whether TV is good or bad is determined by how parents manage it. If d they keeph,their children accompanied, healthy viewing habit would be established and positive effects would be maximized. Otherwise, watching TV can be a worrying situation.