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新目标(Go for it)版初中英语九年级-Uint5 单元测试写作:有烦恼向谁说?

发布时间:2013-06-26 18:03浏览次数:4632
要求:
提示:假如你叫王平,参加了学校的”有烦恼向谁说?”的调查活动(a survey)。


调查结果:

1、大多数向同学、朋友说(理由:年龄相仿,容易交流和理解)

2、一些向老师、家长说(理由:经验丰富、可以得到帮助)
3、少数自己独立解决(理由:不愿与人交流,难以与人相处)


请你根据中文提示用英语给某报社编辑写一封信(信的开头与结尾已经给出),说明情况并提出你自己的观点。字数60-80词左右,不必逐句翻译,可适当发挥。


Dear Editor,

I am a Grade 9 student. Recently we have made a survey ----”To whom do you go when in trouble?” Here are the results.
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Yours Sincerely,
                                                                  Wang Ping
用户的作文(系统评分57.0分
评语:

作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;学术词汇的使用希望还能更熟练一些,拼写检查还需加强;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Dear Editor, I am a Grade 9 student. Recently we have made a survey ----”To whom do you go when in trouble?” Here are the results. Most students want to talk with their students or friends beause they are think that their students or friends and them have the same age. Also,they are easy to understand. Of couse,some students want to ask for the help of their teachers.Teachers have some idea,so they can help students who have trouble.But a few want to soive theirselies. They often don't like to talk with others and are different for others to talk. Yours Sincerely, Wang Ping

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