调查结果:
1、大多数向同学、朋友说(理由:年龄相仿,容易交流和理解)
2、一些向老师、家长说(理由:经验丰富、可以得到帮助)
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Dear Editor,
I am a Grade 9 student. Recently we have made a survey ----”To whom do you go when in trouble?” Here are the results.作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;学术词汇的使用希望还能更熟练一些,拼写检查还需加强;请注意分段。
Dear Editor, I am a Grade 9 student. Recently we have made a survey ----”To whom do you go when in trouble?” Here are the results. Most students want to talk with their students or friends beause they are think that their students or friends and them have the same age. Also,they are easy to understand. Of couse,some students want to ask for the help of their teachers.Teachers have some idea,so they can help students who have trouble.But a few want to soive theirselies. They often don't like to talk with others and are different for others to talk. Yours Sincerely, Wang Ping
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