拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章层次较为清晰;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
Dear Manager, I’m an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good. But launched over former advertising, makes the movie playback delays, and movie playback volume is too large, so that the film does not comfortable. In terms of security you do is not good, safety signs you are not obvious, potential safety trouble yours faithfully Li Hua