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Qingming Festival is one of the twenty-four solar term in china. As the twenty-four solar term objectively reflect the four seasons temperature, rainfall, and other aspects of phenological, so the ancient working people use it for farming activities. "Huainan Zi? Astronomical training" cloud: "after the spring equinox fifteen, B refers to the Big Dipper, then the wind to the tomb." According to the age of "patient" saying: "growth at this time things are clean and bright and clean. Clear so that the." Qingming, temperatures, rainfall increased, it is plowing season. It is "the Qingming Festival, some melon beans", "afforestation, Mo Ching Ming," the farmer's proverb. The solar term and is closely related to agricultural production.
