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了解中国文化。有一天，他看到下面有关成语的漫画，不大明白其中的意思。
文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Song Guoyou is a local farmer, with a stake in his field. Suddenly a rabbit ran, against a stump, breaking the neck and died. Then he lay down their tools, by the tree stump, hoping to pick up the hare. The rabbit could not be found, it is sung people experienced.
