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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误。
Historically, human race has made huge progress in almost every aspect of life, such as medication, education, technology, and science. However, not all people believe that not every aspect has been improved, especially in these 100 years. In my point of view, I think that most of the areas in our lives have been largely developed whereas some specific areas need to be kept developing. Certainly, there are many things which have been making people's life better and better. First of all, the development of medication has been saved enormous lives in history, so we take injections when we get sick, so we take some food supplementary tablets every day, so we are able to do further research on AIDS and cancer. Secondly, the wide spread of education has given chances to people who could not get access to school in ancient times. For example, in most of the western countries and some of the developing countries are giving elementary education for free. Lastly, new technology has changed our life dramatically. People could travel between different continents within one day or two because of the invention of airplane; People could enjoy the high speed telecommunication because of the invention of computer; People could run international business and keep in touch all the time because of the proliferation of the internet. Nonetheless, somehow, there are some areas in our life have not really improved. Surely, the first issue which bothers us is pollution. In last 200 years, the pollution issue became one of the essential problem which impacts human race's future. Afterwards, even the governments tried hardly to reduce the emission of it, the worldwide environment is still getting worse and worse. Moreover, the problem of crime has never been changed, as we may see, there is always negative news on media. Besides, with the new technology, criminals could even bring more impact to this society, such as big bomb, digital crime, online scan. Last, with the population grows larger and larger, the nature resource are not enough for lasting long, so we need to find some clean replacement. In conclusion, of course, our life has been largely improved in many ways, however, there are some certain aspects need to be kept improving.
