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Dear editor， Agree man:they think car is get we convenient, fast, comfortable means of transportation.It can reflect the improvement of national living conditions, the prosperity of the country.It can drive also the development of the industry.so car have many good .It have some bad ,but one's deeds outweigh one's faults. against man：They believe that a lot of a lot of exhaust emissions from cars will pollute the air, causing effects on people's life.Too many can effects of traffic accidents, resulting in more.There are parking problems.can be seen too many cars on the lives of the people there is no taste.
