Question: Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position.
题目讲解
本题要求考生通过定位,概括和分类仔细审题,就某个问题写一篇感想,或就一个事件进行阐述,解释以及论证自己的观点,列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。
观点提示
1、 留学为中国学生提供一个更完善的教育。
2、 在海外留学可以认识许多不同国家的朋友并向他们学习。
3、 留学海外也的确存在着生活适应与思乡之苦
文中词汇表达不够丰富,要多积累学术词汇;建议适当增加长难句的使用;过程性词汇偏少;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
According the picture,it can be seen that parents holding a lot of money while. Obviously,a child sleeping on the heap of money when studying abroad,but why? According the picture,it can be seen that parents holding a lot of money while. Obviously,a child sleeping on the heap of money when studying abroad,but why?