湖南怀化市2012-2013年高二上学期期末试卷英语作文

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today,english was an important language in our life.so many of persons were study english.meanwhile there were so much problem would have .but the most importantly factor is don't lose your confidence.here,i will give you some suggestions to inprove your english .firstly,you can try to keep a diary every day .in the first ,you may feel uncomfertable, but as long as you did ,your english will be better.secondly,listaning english songs and singing it ,it can improve your interesting in english.by the way,your grade will go up .lastly ,join in a english club,so you can study english with friends,and they can piont out your mistakes which you could not thought it.there is all of my idea,i hope your english grade will be higher.