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Today,English was an important language in our life.so many persons were studying English.Meanwhile ,you will found lot's of problem in the way you learning English.And the most importantly factor is don't lose your confidence.Here,I will give you some suggestions to improve your English grade.Firstly,you can try to keep a diary every day.In the first,you may feel uncomfortable with it.But as long as you did,your english will be better.Secondly,listaning songs which singing in English and try to singing it ,it can improve the interest in English.By the way,your grade will go up.Lastly,join in an english club,so you can study English with friends,and they can piont out your mistakes which you could not thought it.There is all of my idea,I hope your English grade will be higher.