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湖南怀化市2012-2013年高二上学期期末试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:13浏览次数:2762
要求:
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是一名英语课代表,发现部分同学对英语学习失去了信心。请你写一篇词数不少于100字的英语短文来鼓励他们,唤起其对学习英语的兴趣。
写作要点:
1、学习英语的重要性。
2、提高英语成绩的措施(至少3点)。
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
评语:

作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Today,English was an important language in our life.so many persons were studying English.Meanwhile ,you will found lot's of problem in the way you learning English.And the most importantly factor is don't lose your confidence.Here,I will give you some suggestions to improve your English grade.Firstly,you can try to keep a diary every day.In the first,you may feel uncomfortable with it.But as long as you did,your english will be better.Secondly,listaning songs which singing in English and try to singing it ,it can improve the interest in English.By the way,your grade will go up.Lastly,join in an english club,so you can study English with friends,and they can piont out your mistakes which you could not thought it.There is all of my idea,I hope your English grade will be higher.

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