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Today,English was an essential language in our life.So many persons were studying English.Meantime,you will find lot's of problem in it.Here,I will give you some suggestions to improve your English grade.Firstly,you can try to hold a diary every day.In the first,you may feel uncomfortable with it.But as long as you did,your english will be better.Secondly,listening songs which singing in English and try to sing it,it can improve the interest in English.By the way,your grade will go up.Lastly,join in an english club,so you can study English with friends,and they can piont out your mistakes which you could not thought it.There is all of my idea,I hope your English grade will be higher.