文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。
Today,English was an essential language in our life.So many persons were studying English.Meantime,you will find lot's of problem in it.Here,I will award you some suggestions to improve your English grade.Firstly,you can try to hold a diary each day.In the first,you may feel uncomfortable with it.nevertheless as long as you did,your english will be better.Secondly,listening to songs which singing in English and try to sing it,it can improve the interest in English.By the way,your grade will go up.Lastly,join in an english club,so you can study English with friends,and they can piont out your mistakes which you could not thought it.There is all of my idea,I hope your English grade will be higher.