拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和长句的使用;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅;请注意分段。
English is important and necessary to us.The reason is that only if you learn English well will you be able to communicate with foreigners.Learning English contribute to know more about foreign culture and I am greatly convinced that learning English is a good way to improve our knowledge. Here is advice for you.Firstly,what we have to do is reading as much as we could.Secondly,when we feel tired,we can listen some English songs or watch some English movies.Believe it or not,with learning,we will be better and better.Thirdly,we need to go on learning.Consequently,patience is the key to success.