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China is now more and more involved in international events, so it is necessary for us to improve the qualities of the citizens as manners play an important role in international communication. Sometimes some people don't behave properly in our daily lives. For example, spitting in public places can be seen somewhere.Anyone that see that was unhappym.The flowers in public gardens are picked. What is worse, rubbish and plastic bags are thrown on the ground in the street. In my opinion, these bad behaviors will make bad influents to China.China is a poliet country,so all people should be taught to be well-behaved and every one of us should form good habits from now on.