初中英语命题作文真题演练(70):My class

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My Class My name is Wang Fang．I am is Class Three，Grade Seven in Shanghai middle school．there are 46 students in wt class．There are 24 boys and 22 girls．Jim is from England．Mike．Bill and Sandy are from America．Mrs. Black is our English teacher we all like English very much．I like my class．