2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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I think it's impossible for somebody not to success except they loses all confidence for themselves,or else they will use their great power to make them a successful life.Although someone don't want to compare with other people,they live in a competitive society which their parents,alternatives,friends,wife or husband will compare them with others.In order to let their parents,friends be pround of them,they should succeed.In other way,they should be responsible for themselves,they must try their best to make their life meaningful not to waste time and changes to have a life. There are many ways which can lead to success,first of all,diligence is essencial that not everyone of us is abslutely intelligent,so we need to pay more than others to ensure we can reach their level.Furthermore,we should have confidence for ourselves,even though we will meet lots of difficulties in our way to success,we should be confident that we are the best.When we open our eyes to see the first sunlight in the morning,we should tell us that we can success,that will make us more confident.Last but not least,we should be innovative,because the successful people are those who are different from other formal people,we should be active in our lives to see new things,take part in new activities that will make our life more colorful. Although not everyone of us will succeed in the last,if we don't make a try,we will lose at fisrt,if we make our most payment,even if we don't make perfect,we make a prograss we are also the succeesful people.