邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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School safety is important and necessary to students.However,school safety has become a problem since 2010.Obviously,improving school safety is urgency. On my own perspective,education must be improved.The reason is that only if we improve education will we be able to stop these affairs' origin.What's more,Increasing security guard is a good way to improve school safety.