高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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Playing football is my favorite.And I fell in love with it by chance. One day,when I go home,I saw a football on my way home .I picked up it and I tell my friends.From then on , I often play football with my friends,as well as I fell in love with it. I often practice with my classmates after class.And I often play football matches to improve my playing skills.Because I want to bacome a professional football player as Beckham.He is my favorite pootball player.He is a handsome boy as well as a great professional football player.