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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
smart consumer is just buying what you are needing As a student ,we are always careful in our daily life, and trying our best to be a smart consumer. Some one collects coupons and others look for group-buy deals. Does all these ways make us to be a good consumer? My answer is --definitely not. There are lots of consumption traps nowadays. Sometimes when we feel happy for getting a coupon, we just fall into the trap. Because we are too happy for the money that we could have saved to think it over, whether we should spend the money or not.We always spend more money on the items that we don't need at all on the stimulation of the coupon or group-buy deals. Therefore, we could waste money without notice that. I'm sure that a smart consumer is knowing what is the real things he wants. He will pay as little as he can on condition that the item is really being needed.