高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

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Civilized manners Civilized manners is very important in international exchanges, so as to improve the national culture be imperative. Recently, our class had a heated discussion on the topic. We all think the civilized etiquette is very important.Often in a lot of time to see the uncivilized behavior .some uncivilized behavior we often see。