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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
With the development of society and the improvement of people's life,people live a better life.More and more people would like to take a trip to relax them.And the cost of trave already has increased the recent years. Some people think that it's good for increase GDP,and people think,it's difficult for the ordinary people.For them,the economical is the best way of the journey.Meanwhile,ndthe ordinary people also think,that is what a wasting. In my opinion,first,the businessmen should take ordinary people into considerable,but not just for benefit of business.So,more and more people who like them could enjoy themselves.Second,the government should involve in service. In short, I hope that more and more people have enjoyable travel.
