2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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With the devolepment of computer,shopping online is very conveninet for everyone.It has become a fashional way to buy things . As far as I'm concerned,shopping online has its shortcomings.For examples,if you buy a T-shit on line ,you are unable to know its quality and real colour.Sometimes ,you will be disappointed .