2007年高考英语作文真题(全国卷Ⅰ):找英语笔友

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I hope my ideal pen friend will be young,because we can talk with each other without generation gap.The reason why I think my ideal pen pal is a male will better than a female is that I am a boy and I think we can communicate easier.My favorite sport is swimming,so finding a friend can go to swimming with me in summer is a amazing thing,which I want a guy can play with me.What's more,both keeping pets and tour are my hobbies.Finally,I hope I can find my ideal pen pal to share happiness and sorrow with him and he can broaden my horizon.