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浙江省杭州市2011-2012学年八年级英语下学期期末考试测试试卷

发布时间:2013-06-14 18:30浏览次数:3380[网页划词已开启]
要求:
紧张的初二学习就快结束了,同学们在一起讨论这个暑假干什么,下面是同学们讨论的结果。请你根据下面的表格把学生的们讨论结果写成一篇短文。
Name
Activities
Reasons
Tina
Go to Beijing
1.     To see the Great Wall and other beautiful sights in Beijing
2.     have fun
Jim
Stay at home
1.     Too tired and have a good rest
2.     ……
You
……
……
注意:1. 内容必须包括表格中的信息;
 2. 开头已经为你写好,你只需接着写;
     3. 词数:70个左右。开头的部分内容不计入总词数。
   Recently our class had a discussion about what they would do in the coming summer vacation. Here is the result:  
用户的作文(系统评分61.0分
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;没有能够有效地使用连接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

Tina is a friend of mine.She intends to visit to Beijing because she really wants to see the Great Wall.She thinks the Great Wall must be beautiful extremely.Besides the Great Wall,Beijing also has other nice sights ,such as the Summer Palace,the National Grand Theater and so on.Tina said,she maybe has a great deal of fun during this trip. Jim is my classmates.His plan for summer holiday is quite easy. He just wants to stay at home because he is too tired for his studies,and ready to have a good rest. My plan for this summer holiday is very easy,too.I will have sports to refine my health.Then,having a good rest,too. I hope all of us will spend a meaning holiday!

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