作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Playing football is my favorite. I fell in love with it by chance. One day, I found a football on my way home. I was so interested in the ball that I began to play it with my friends. From then on, football became part of my life. I often play football with my classmates after class. We often train ourselves, and sometimes we compete in football games in order to improve our skills. Among all the football stars, my favorite football player is Beckham.His skills impress me a lot.My greatest dream is to become a professional football player when I grow up.