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Mark saw the empty house and wanted to visit it , then he went into one of the empty old houses. He saw a door leading down into a small dark cellar. He went into the cellar to see what he could find. Just then he heard a terrible crash. The roof of the old house fell in. Mark tried to open the cellar door. But he couldn’t. So he had to stay there and he was very afraid. Mark was saved three days later by some policemen.
