题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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There is widespread concern over the issue that what is the mean of space research.But it is well known that the opinion concerning the hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people believe that money spent on space research benefits all humanity.In their view there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, they think by researching space, we can know the competent of universe and found the rules of it's evolution.Only by this way we can expect the difficulty we will meet in the future.In the second place they believe when we know what is the universe, we can get benefit from using the resource of it. So it goes without saying that space research is very important for all humanity. People,however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that money for this type of research is wasted.In their point of view, on the one hand, we never get benefit from the space research,although lots of money have been spend on it.On the second hand, there are many mystery on earth which we can not explain and many difficulty we must conquer,so people should spend many on useful things.Therefore ,there is no doubt that space research is useless for humanity. As far as I am concerned,I firmly support the former opinion that space research will benefit all humanity.It is not only because we can use the resource of universe,but also because by this research, we can understand the surrounding of the earth.The more we know the enviroment we live in the more we can get from it.