2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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computer and man As the technology's development is more and more fast, the computer may instand of people oneday. So we need to take it seriously. However, the computer can not have human 's emotion,that is the weakness of the computer. As we know, the computer works quickly,it can get the result quickly,it can give the justice judgement than human.But it can not conside the environment into the