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Dear George, I was very glad to have received your letter. Now I’d like to tell you about the household hotels in my hometown.The household hotel is nice to stay in.You can not only learn about China , but also feel at home as well by dining with the family for only 20 yuan a day. Of course you can cook by yourself if the food doesn't fits you. It is really cheap to live in a single room for 30 yuan a day and a double room for 20 yuan each. You can bathe and swim in the sea, climb the hill and do unpaid jobs in the greenhouse if you like. I'm looking forward to your coming. Yours, Li Hua