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Dear Mike, I'm glad to know that you are coming to China with your parents and spend the Mid-Autumn Day here. The Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history .It is celebrated only by Chinese people. It is in August 15th of the Chinese lunar year when a family get together and enjoy the dinner together. After that they eat mooncakes, which stands for the spirits of the festival-unity. Often ,if the weather permits, they will go out of the house to enjoy the bright moonlight, talking about something pleasant. It is one of the most important festivals for Chinese people. I wish you have a pleasant journey and I’m sure you will like our traditional Mid-Autumn Day. Yours, Li Hua