文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;请注意分段。
Dear George, Welcome to the Chinese. I tell you now household Hotel information:First,single room 30 yuan per day; a double room 20 yuan per person per day for meals 20 yuan per person per day。second ,And hosts an eating lunch, a menu, a la carte, also can cook by yourself。third,Sea bathing, swimming, mountain climbing, unpaid greenhouse work (voluntary) supplement: close to understand China, still can feel the family atmosphere。 I hope have good time.