雅思写作范文:城市交通问题

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；作者能较准确地使用学术词汇，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；请注意分段。

Today in China ,transportation is becoming an increasingly headache problem to Chinese government and genernal people. Pollution of mobile gas, crowdness, transportation accident and other related hot topics about transportation continuously attract people to focus on. At the same time ,Chinese governemnt is often accused of low efficiency in solving problem of urban transporation. Pollution is an evitable issue . The roads are not designed and planned appropriately ,as well as the amount of private cars .