初中英语命题作文真题演练(70):My class

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My class My name is Wangfang.I'm in grade seven of Shanghai second middle school students of class three。46 people there are in our class, 24 boys, 22 girls。The Jim, Mike.Bill and Sandy from America。They are outgoing childhood.They like slime .All the students like to learn English.Mrs. Black is we English teacher.we very like it.He is very humorous, lectures are very good。