2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分学术词汇；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Mental health is becoming an increasingly troublesome issue for undergraduates.We can easily obtain all kinds of information about college students' pressure or emotional problems on the internet.Solving the problem needs collaborative efforts from both universities and students themselves. On the one hand,authorities in universities should play a critical role in the situation.To begin with,schools ,such as colleges or universities,can provide chances for students to ease their tension.What's more,some are physically strong,but mentally weak in terms of coping with difficulty.Teachers may have a chance to help them in advance .Besides ,specialists in this field are to be requied to make full preparation for cases in time. On the other hand,students should try to face the reality and figure out the causes of depression so that they can better understand it.They should learn how to identify unhealthy behaviors or thoughts and make changes accordingly.