有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累。
Children often receive “screen time” on condition that they behave well and they value it a lot, while parents still doubt whether it really benefits children. It is not wise for parents to reward their children with screen time. Although screen time is necessary for those who want to entertain themselves, children can be affected by constantly watching TV or playing computer games. What’s worse, rewarding children’s good behaviors with screen time can make the children lose the sense of responsibility. Instead of sitting in front of the screen all the time, I prefer a balance of physical and intellectual activities. I often participate in sports such as ball games and running slowly, which offers me the opportunities to strengthen my body. Meanwhile, intellectual activities, such as reading a good book and listening to a favourite record, serve to develop my mind.