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People in modern society live under a lot of pressure. There are three kinds of pressure working on people today: pressure from education, family and career. It is easy to blame the school for charging too much money, the family members for the heavy burden, and the society for the fierce competition. It is universally acknowledged that there is public perception people should relax. It is important for them to keep a good mood under the social life. Long gone are the days when people lived their life with a certain relaxation, sampling a wide variety of activities—film, music, art, poetry. But now, a lot of people suffer from a lot of pressure. They can’t communicate well with co-workers and family members, and have unbalanced, one-dimensional lives. Some people complain of symptoms of stress, for instance, loss of appetite, a complete sense of exhaustion, insomnia and low morale. Thus have destructive effect on their health. People tend to lose temper easily. What’s more, a high rate of suicide may warn people of their emotional well-being. To be a healthy person, one should keep a good mood, according to some psychology experts. Those little things may seem relatively insignificant—reading interesting novels, playing volleyball, spending time with family and friends,getting plenty of rest, going fishing. They can help you keep a good mood.
