2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇表达丰富度不足，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请注意分段。

I cannot agree the title more. Though the person who only has a strong will cannot be successful,nothing succeeds without a strong will. It is said the successful may has no gifts,but he must have a strong will.Only the man,who has a strong will ,can make it finally.Such are us students,too.We cannot make a great devotion unless we can study hard. We students should treat the studying as how soliders treat the instructions.Please remember that study harder and harder,have a strong will in our full life.