小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend is MENG CHEN.He is very fun,he have a big mouth and small eye,we usually go to play computer game in the evening.so our feelings is very good.he is my best friend,i will give up a lot for he,our dream is to open a our Corporation,it's name Zhongcheng corporation.