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文中词汇表达较灵活丰富，不过请检查文章的单词拼写；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Encouragements can serve a ray hope during difficult times. The best ones to encourage a soul are our friends. It was three years ago when I just to end High . For the first time I failed in an English exam which I thought I was best at. I felt very depressed. My best friend, Lily, tried to me, offering emoonal suort.arefully and told me succeeded in inventing the electric bulb after ire than 300 times. with her patient encouragement, I overcame depress was determined to try hard again. In the next exam, I did it. Encouragement is the best means help someone feel better. It can give the courage to fight difficulties and motivate someone to on.
