高一英语作文模拟题:写一份英语广播稿

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Dear teachers and schoolmates, May I have your attention please? I have an announcement to . In order to help us learn more about China , Professor Li Bo from Peking University us a lecture. He will talk about the background of the of China Spaceflight as well as its process. Besides,astronauts and about the of Shenzhou Spaceships will also introduced. The lecture will be held on Thursday, the fifth of January and will begin at 2:30 pm in the Lecture Hall of our school. Anyone who's interested in the topic is welcome to attend the lecture. Don't forget to be on time. 、、 That's all. for your attention.