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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；可以适当增加副词的使用。
Saving Money How's to be a smart consumer? In my opinion,saving every little money can be a smart consumer. First, we can save money by many ways. For example, if we want to go to the cinema,we can buy tickets by goup-buy website. You will find you spend less money than buying them by the cinema's ticket counter. Second, we need develop a right ideal of consumption. I think we should buy the things what we do really need. Most people are easy to be absorbed by the all kinds of advertisements, the result is that we have bought a lot of things that we don't need. I think it's a wasting. In a summarize,we should spend our money on right things and we can use some ways to help us to spend less money to buy more things.
