高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少。

China is now more and more involved in international events, so it is necessary for us to improve the qualitie as manner play an important role in communication. Sometimes some people don't in our daily live. For example, spitting in public places can be seen. The flower garden is pickedin.worse, rubbish and bag are thrown on the ground on the street. In my opinion, bad behavior will make bad impressions visitors to China,China as country with long history. So people should be taught to be well behaved and everyone of us should have good habits from now .