作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
English has become an international language. It is widely used in the world. However, a few students find it hard to master it. Let me show how. make up your mind to learn English well and never give it up. it is a good way to read the text aloud in the morning and try to remember the important words, phrases and patterns. it is suggested that you should finish all the homework on time. When you come across some problems, turn to your teacher or classmates for help. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. all of us could make great progress one day.